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by Independence Forever Jun 18, 2008
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From far away battlefields to local towns
surges of Independence fills and drowns
from Bastogne to Saratoga the cry rises
at home and abroad groups of varied sizes
"Independence Day! Independence Day!"
the flag rises on Iwo Jima as the family sits to eat
lofty hills overlooking Saigon to Barbecue meat
a flame rises in the breast as the flag is hoisted up
no corruption on this day just the raising of the cup
"Liberty! Freedom! Equality!"
never so much has a cry resounded through the land
from Alaska's untamed beauty to Florida's bright sand
A resounding cry fills gathering places from sea to sea
you can feel it rising, you can feel the power, the glee
"Independence Day! Independence Day!"this is the latest in a long series of Independence day poems done by me, I hope you enjoy it
by Aureus Argentum
O.O that was astounding. I absolutely loved it. I also loved how you put them into verses. It's all very well written and expressed.
<never so much has a cry resounded through the land
from Alaska's untamed beauty to Florida's bright sand>
Simply amazing. I loved it. Kudos. :)
Also, thank you for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)