Thats deep....wow i like it

Very touching... the emotions attached to the box have been beautifully captured...

"This box will always stay with her no matter what.
It contains a big part of her that she never plans to let go.
It shows all the great moments she spent with you that will never disappear.
They will always stay in this box for her to look back on in the future."

^^ there are some things in life we cannot part with no matter what... so many beautiful memories are attached to them... I could relate with it...

wonderful write...
keep writing..

This was amazing. I absolutely loved the emotion you put in it. I like how it's kind of sad, due to a lost love, but it was sweet, at the same time. A beautiful piece.

5/5

-Briana

Although this reads more for me as a piece of prose instead of poetry, I find it difficult to actually find faults within it, simply because it's so beautiful. It tells a story of love that's been tortured, but is still there. An undying love, if you like.

Simply wonderful to read. :]

This is kinda like a "story-poem" which I'm a big fan of but I'm really bad at it :\

All I have to say is.......

I noticed you used the word "She & It" alot in the starts of each stanza, Just try to mix up your vocabulary a little more.... good job!4/5

5/5 wonderful..
i liked it alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!