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by Strange and Beautiful
Well done Hun,
Well written and good rhyming. I'm a fan of rhyming. Keep up the great work.
by Courageous Dreamer
Good job, i wouldn't say this poem had the greatest of flows, but I ended up enjoying the read and the different things that make you realize that a storm is approaching. good job 5/5
Well for me it was good up until the ending. The flow was off and it kinda through me a little bit. But otherwise it had some good imagery and the rhymes weren't too bad. Maybe some more striking words though. So I'm going to give it a 4
by Lonely Rider
Well written.. I liked the title most..
very well described.. the approach of storm.. the lightening...
the last stanza is touching... but i hope you could change the last line... its a little off...
overall a nice read...
by LESBIAN KIZZEZ
The last stanza is nice, but a little bit off.
That was simple and down to the point i liked! i showed emotion, very srong emotion i loved it! 5/5