I love this, very well-written!! Every line was flawless and so well put!

I did like how in the end you put: "What do you see in mine?"

I enjoyed every line, so keep it up!

By the way, good luck with the contest! :)

Squeeeeeeee~ I like this one a lot! It's so.. genuine. Sweet. AWESOME. :D The words just flow nicely and the meaning is crystal clear. Love it!