Comments : It's Best to Just Pretend...

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is really good, the way you wrote this was very unique.

    "*you are my silence*
    *I am yours*
    *together we won't
    (speak a word)*"

    I love these lines, very sweet! Good job throughout this poem, you did very well. Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 15 years ago

    by Annaam

    WOw... This is something different and very well-done! Again, perfect rhyming. The expressions are strong.

    ``*you are my silence*
    *I am yours*
    *together we won't
    (speak a word)*
    --> Flawless!

    ``You have me here on pause but I can see what's going to be played
    And yet I'm fine while stuck in pause 'cause I don't want to face the change;
    Don't want to let this day go by and, along with it, you as well;
    I'm fine pretending as the ground comes near
    {I never}
    (even)
    [fell]
    --> I love this one too. The usage of words is excellent and you've built it up very well!

    In the end, another amazing write.
    5/5!! :)