Comments : Before Tomorrow Comes

  • 9 years ago

    by kate

    Amazing poem. I really liked this one and i graduated last year [2007] and this was well writen and very sad in a way, we don't want memories to leave us and we honestly don't want to leave anyone behind but thats life we all end it once we are done and graduated., but you have a point here, why don't we all be best friends before the year is run out, before our lives change in a moment, but it never does., does it.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 9 years ago

    by JUSTiNA

    This is sad! But Its beautifully written.
    It is clear that you are very talented.
    Great job.
    Continue writing!
    --Justina

  • 9 years ago

    by Mya

    I liked this. It had a certain jazz 2 it. Like very

  • 9 years ago

    by Mya

    Sorry lol I pres send by mistake, but all I was going 2 say was that it was sorta like William Shakespeare but without the thou and shalt, etc. lol It was good 5/5