Crap. what's wrong with james?

This was such a beautiful touching poem!
It filled with emotion!
I don't know james, but what's wrong with him?
This was a really nice thing to do for him.
I don't see one thing that you can change to make it better.
This piece is perfect in my opinion!

5/5

great work!!!!
Be Blessed!!!

Outstanding poem, very well written with a pleasing metre and a rhyme scheme that is near perfect. Without a doubt the best poem by a teen that I have read on this site to this date. Well worthy of the highest praise.

Wow, this is an amazing poem. its very true to anyone who lost someone that they love so much, the question is always why? I know we all won't understand it and won't ever yet the question of why but you did an amazing job and im sorry that you lost someone so great, im sure he's looking down on you guys everyday.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Very well written...
so emotional and touching...

"You've got all Your angels
So what if You're missing one?
What if we need him more?
What if his work is still not done?"

^^ aww... this is so hearfelt...these words are echoed by every heart for their loved ones...

very beautiful poem... keep writing...

OMG this is so sad, but very heartfelt . written truly greatly. you almost made me cry remembering when i lost my little sister couple years ago..
you truly deserve a 5/5 from me.

That was a excellent poem. when i read it, it almost made me cry :'(. so i give it a 5/5

Wow. That was really touching. I loved how it turned out to be a prayer. I thought that was unique. :) Everything flowed, the words were simple, but it was just enough in this poem. It was amazing.

I can relate to this poem .. nice job

Wow that's deep it's really good keep it up

Although i have no belief in Him i wish to tell you that it was very heart touching and hope that who ever this person in distress is i wish them health and recovery.

"Life is a simple thing, it is unfair but if you keep believing and fighting for it you'll see the rewards in the end"

Excellent work, gave that true sense of an unexpected, unfair event occuring to someone good. Too many times the bad walk on in life good but the good face the worst of the world, and in this case, the potential end. Keep on writing look forward to future works from you, 5/5.

Very well written
i love the second to last stanza
it really reaches out to god, to ask for help
overall 5/5

Wow, so deep and pure! It really made me think of my brother! :')