Well thought off...
Inspiring......
Some true poets still live in this world
and you are one of them...

I would have to agree with Meredith in that case. Using real words insted of slang can only help what you are trying to say. Now, if Eva was supposed to be like that because it stands for someone's name, then that's OK. But please try to use the correct form of "for." With the rhyme and beat i could find no faults. I hope you keep up the good work.

This poem is beautiful i mean i write poems in less then a minute but thats because i know how to get my feelings out its nice to know that u put alot of thought into this!!!!

mwah love
lisa

This Poem is truly awesome..
I really liked it..
You are an excellente writer! =D

Adik !!
hehe
ang kulet ng pagkkgwa
aus!!!
glingan mo pa ^^