Comments : I Hope You're Happy

  • Oh it made me so sad becuase I know what the girl is feeling.:(
    Anyways, I really like this poem. It has a nice flow and consistent structure. It's also easy to read and understand the purpose. The only part I really don't like is the first stanza because you use happy and crappy.To me it doesn't do the rest of the poem justice. Other than that I think it's a good write.