Awesome. I loved this poem. Your word choice was excellent.

"And she sits as the worlds war and collide...
Alice is lost,
And the Cheshire grins. "

^^ I really liked the ending. It just kind of.. stopped. I don't know why, but I've always liked that.

5/5

-Briana

This Way Very Good....And Different Than Most Poems I Have Read...Keep Up The Good Work