Comments : Wax Smiles (Monchielle)

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    WOW!! i love it! its so powerful!

  • 15 years ago

    by Spirit

    -wax smiles

    I found my self reading this poem as if it was an ABCB poem with an add on to the begaining. I liked the whole message of this piece and the constant 6 syllables gave this piece a flawless flow.
    thank you for the read.