Wow that was very very good. i like the flu of it. and it is very deep. keep up the great work.

That was such a beautiful and heart touching write.
Well done.
Hope you are well ,take care.

One of the deepest poems u have ever written
really good one Karan

keep it up always

Deep within the story of dreamflower petals
A stranger's footprints still walk
Something that I have been following for months
Someone with whom I am afraid can no more talk

Deep within the story of dreamflower petals
Always think of things, which only you and I can see & hear
Still feel and wonder moments once spent now all mere dreams
True as they were yesterday Wish they remained true forever.

Karan its absolutely well written..I love it ...
And yeah memories can never be forgotten !
cheers
Biya

Deep within the story of dreamflower petals
Always think of things, which only you and I can see & hear
Still feel and wonder moments once spent now all mere dreams
True as they were yesterday Wish they remained true forever.

This is so Gorgeous...U r a great writer..
This poem is sad and deep that's why it touched me..
Great job,keep it up:)
Take care..

This was a very good write plz do keep up the good work ....i really do thank you for reading and commenting on my poems as well keep it up

Karan this was a wonderful write. Just beautifully worded and the imagery was breathtaking
I enjoy your poems very much. Keep it up

I love the repetition of the first line from the beginning through the whole piece, that created interesting rhythm. Also, the word dreamflower is beautiful and creative, it says so much. I deeply enjoyed in this greatly written piece from the beginning to the end. You created truly lovely and serene rhythm and your choice of words in nice.

- Deep within the story of dreamflower petals
The rain still falls in torrents
A place where no eyes care to hug these tears
In the background it's only rain and broken sighs.-
^^^
This is my favorite stanza, is is utterly amazing and breathtaking. I love every line. You managed to paint such vivid pictures with your words. Impressive!

Just one critique: In the last stanza, "see & hear" should be corrected- 'see and hear', in looks more beautiful.

Great job, as always!

Nice one!!!!

Very touching write... really wonderful...
"Deep within the story of dreamflower petals".. very interesting title...liked it

"dreamflower".. irally liked the use of this word... beautiful..

"Deep within the story of dreamflower petals
Dewdrops quietly hide a song
Something I have waited to hear
A voice that has evaded ears for so long."

^^ wonderful stanza...

keep writing...

Very beautiful and poignant. Not bad for a 2 year old. ;)

Deep within the story of dreamflower petals
Dewdrops quietly hide a song
Something I have waited to hear
A voice that has evaded ears for so long.

Deep within the story of dreamflower petals
A stranger's footprints still walk
Something that I have been following for months
Someone with whom I am afraid can no more talk.

Still feel and wonder of moments once spent now all mere dreams
True as they were yesterday Wish they remained true forever

More than LOVELY, karan !!
I liked this poem till the end of craze :) really !! Nicely written

Keep writing !
Cheers
Biya

..sad and touching..beautiful poem..

Maybe it's the fact that it's 3 something in the morning or maybe because of the choice of music I am currently listening too. (Say All I Need by One Republic). I'm in awe of this poem. Literally, I just stopped breathing. This was so incrediably beautiful, you have a way with words. The final stanza was so sad yet meaningful, keep writing :)

5/5

I like the simplicity of this poem yet it is so
sad and deep. I also like the repetion of "deep within the story of dreamflower petals"..very nice. Take care.

What a wonderful piece! Gracefully written!

Another deep and meaningful poem. good! 5/5

Its not literal...I really can't get into literal poems. This poem is just abstract enough to allow you to imagine.