I liked the word choice and the rhyming pattern. Dude I guess u gotta change the word gave to given, it wud sound better. Overall its nice.

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This piece was nicely written and a very good read. Although the flow was a bit rocky, I really like it. I understand exactly how this feels like, and I get the poem so well. And some of the rhyme seemed a bit forced, but still a great poem :] 5/5.

I really love this poem.I know that it's about wanting a love you can't have but,I looked at it in a different angle.The last sentence made me think of the relationship that I just got out of because I wonder what I did wrong and what the future could have held.5/5

---amber---

Short but direct to the point...It explained well how much feelings you have for the girl...The ryhme made the poem so cute although filled with sadness...great job..

Wonderful job.
I loved it =]
5/5

Some paths are meant to be crossed again and you never know when it will happen. Nice work, great words, well placed and thought out. Bravo