Comments : Broken Hearts don't mend

  • 9 years ago

    by sweet escape

    This poem is very well writen and the emotion you put into it is amazing....i can feel it comming off the page at me.
    great job.
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by HvN

    Beautifully written, 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by kate

    This is a great poem. I loved how you talked about a heart of what it does or what I got out of this. but its a perfect well piece you have here though.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 9 years ago

    by Prasad Ramesh Baadkar

    Eah right... broken hearts dn't mend.. n if it ever mends... d scars remain frever, unattended, unhealed..

    Tat one was nice 2 Toooooooo...

    Keep it up..

    Best wishz... karan

  • 9 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe this piece is sad, but very true. I liked the title, a lot. And the idea/meaning of the poem. I liked the way you worded this too, I get it completely. You started really well and ended the piece powerfully. I loved it :] 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Excellent poem. Very good word-choice. (: The meaning was good as well. Good title, It was interesting to see how you used it. Great job. *5/5.*

  • 9 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is really good.. but i think your vocabulary use was a little over the top.. you might want to use simple words sometimes because you never know who will be reading your poem and you want to make sure the reader understands what he/she is reading.

    but i enjoyed it. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    That was an excellent poem. I loved all of it and especially the ending. Keep up the good work. -Sasha

  • 9 years ago

    by jordan

    I know this feeling of having a broken heart.
    this poem is aswome! i want my boyfriend to read this poem. you should read my poem BROKEN RELATIONSHIP.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cayce

    Aww.. this poem really touched me. I'm feeling kind of like this right now. I liked your word choice, it really helped with staying interested in the poem.

    ----------> Broken Hearts don't mend
    `` This one line really stuck out to me. I keep repeating it over and over in my mind. I love the raw emotion it has, and I do agree with it. Broken hearts can get use to the pain, they can even be forgotten about briefly, but they never completely heal. That pain will always be there deep down. I know that a little too well.

    I think you could make it a little better if you go back and add more punctuation, but that's the only thing I would change.

    Great work! x]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 9 years ago

    by Bugg

    This was very, very emotional. I loved the title. It's true, broken hearts don't mend. They're always torn apart and they never heal. I loved your choice in words - they were strong and they helped to make the poem stand out.

  • 9 years ago

    by The Queen

    Ouch..so true..Nice choice of words...And it touched me deeply..Good Job.

  • 9 years ago

    by Blissful

    The title truly captured my attention and the poem just blew me away. It was so heartbreaking to read because although we hope for our hearts to fully heal, sometimes they scars still remain as open wounds. You described this beautifully. I loved your diverse language usage and the flow was just flawless. Well done *5/5*

  • 9 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Aw. This is so true. No matter how hard we try to heal our hearts, we'll always have that scar. I liked this poem a lot. However, I feel that because you put a period on the fourth line of the last stanza, you should have put a period on each fourth line. Your word choice is really good, too.

    5/5

    -Briana

  • 9 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow what a poem!

    "Broken Hearts don't mend"

    The heading absolutely matches with its content ans its very apt!

    I loved the way words are rhymed consecutively. This kinda poems I just love. You have touched my heart!

    Tc and lucks!
    Fsams

  • 9 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    'Heart breaks silently
    To endure they are designed
    Even if you try to stitch
    Scars linger behind.'

    i love this stanza and the poem as a whole. I love the flow and the rhyme scheme. Found no grammatical errors.

    "Wipe off someone's tear
    Be careful when you chide
    Shower abundant smiles
    The joy is reflected inside"

    the flow seems kind of off in this stanza though just because the second line has 7 syllables and the fourth has 8. I know it's not that big of a difference but read it aloud and see what you think. just a friendly suggestion :), otherwise beautiful, 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Maris

    What a beautiful poem!

    "Heart breaks silently
    To endure they are designed
    Even if you try to stitch
    Scars linger behind."

    Most definitely my favorite part! Because it's so true to most! No matter how much a person tries, if they've been hurt really badly, then they can never really ENTIRELY heal.. they just keep their minds off it to 'get over it', for the most part. :3 lovely!

  • 9 years ago

    by Corinne

    A lot of wisdom packed into a little poem. Very nicely written

  • 8 years ago

    by MS Multani

    M jst speechless,,, its plainly lovely n beautiful,,,wow

  • 5 years ago

    by KELLiE SHEA

    ABSOLUTLY AMAZING 5/5!