Love Hold

by David   Jul 6, 2008


How did she tell me?
So that I always knew
That our life together
Was to be so special,
Only experienced by a select few

I was so blind to the truth,
So ignorant and confused
It hurt when I first realized
My heart was used and abused

Yet what words can I say as a plea?
To change your mind and make you change.
What harmony and affection can hold you to me?

Yet you cut off my plea to you
And you laugh in my face
I'm torn and broken
I'm forever disgraced

How did it end up like this?
How did it end at all?!
We were once so strong and firm
Please tell me how did we fall?

I am alone, I am crying,
My body within is stone cold
So not to let the thoughts in
For what is my life?
Without my love hold...

Fictitious and just trying out new things :)

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  • 8 years ago

    by Georgia

    Wow so good i remember when you first started. you have come along way and i still get hooked on every poem =]xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Oh.that one was great to read
    Rhyme and emotions are so into each other
    Those are who made it so perfect

    Yet you cut off my plea to you
    And you laugh in my face
    I'm torn and broken
    I'm forever disgraced

    Keep it up,
    Laura

  • 9 years ago

    by babygirl8610

    That is a good poem it reminds me of my ex's perspective of our relationship

  • 9 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very emotional writing. liked the structure of the poem. It interesting to read because it touches heart. Good one.

  • 9 years ago

    by jana

    Nice poem u got there keep up!