I really like this one, especially the last line :) What's up?

God ! God ! what a fearless poem ! It did shake me well ,and at the same time made me wonder ! Would a girl ever have such a heart ?!!! ,frankly I've never seen ! i don't know if your poem was about something you suffered from and complained , something true happened to you ,or if it is only from your avid imagination! but you've overturned all the conceptions and meanings (ofcourse with your magic poetic way excellently) ,and its been like it is my first experience reading that sort of poems !
since you can come out with a creative way of writing that refers to your avaid wide imagination !
you've become now one of my favroite !
I promise to be your angel of darkness
I promise to be the cause of all your sickness

I'll keep watching you when you are suffering
I'll laugh at you when you are shattering

You played your role and here comes mine
The beat will come to you suddenly with no sign

You judged me with no mercy and that was so fast
So now you can't expect which place of you will bleed at last

No matter if you have learned the lesson this way or another
In all cases I'll come to you at night & paint your room with the red color

ofocurse i cannot say that you have a harsh heart ,or a stone heart ,but it seems like you have ah eart of a warrior ! :D
5/5

Nice way to paint a dark thought in a dark poem....

good job, keep it up

Nice job. very Dark.

"I'll keep watching you when you are suffering
I'll laugh at you when you are shattering"

--one of my favorite parts.

great job. keep it up

and thank you for the comment on mine.

This is an amazing poem i love

Amazing, I agree with all the other comments on here. This is the first poem of yours i've read but intend to read more. The line below is so poweful, and can be used to express many situation. Thanks for the power in this.

Hate is my solution, shelter and fever
As I can't kill you everyday but I can hate you forever

I never thought of the satisfaction that could come from hate. Although, I always believed in the power of hate. My favorite line has to be:
"As I can't kill you everyday but I can hate you forever."

That was awesome. I would sure like to send that out to past loves. Sadly, I have to say I enjoyed this poem too much for my own good, LOL. It was very powerful. Great job as always.

Such a dark, sinister poem. Very well-written. Straight to the point of hating someone, and using your hatred as a reason for revenge. Great poem. 5/5

You have captured this very powerfull emotion perfectly... I love how simply you put forward and dismiss the alternatives. Every aspect of the emotion is presented. love it...

OMG,IT WAS REALLY FANTASTIC!!!!some people think that when you hate someone that you are selfish, don't know that the person you hate he is also the one who hurts you and he is the one who taught you how to hate others.

nice poem 5\5...