Comments : A Desperate Generation

  • 10 years ago

    by Kate

    Wow, completely amazing. the thoughts and the way its written, leaves me speechless!. I completely agree though, I've been trying to write a poem like this for ages but never had the right words, yet you did it so well, great way to get the point across, and hey who knows, maybe people may finally listen.

  • 1 year ago

    by Tony

    But we are still sleeping,
    In our materialistic minds,
    And once things get out of hand,
    We'll be out of time

    Im filled with images of families vegging out on smart phones, video games, and tv instead of spending quality time together.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      It's sad and unfortunate, but very true.

  • 1 year ago

    by chandelier

    gosh...every word is so true. Beautifully written. You just put every scenario of today's world into words so effortlessly , yet so beautifully.
    And i loved your works
    truly inspiring:)

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Wow! Thank you so much! I truly appreciate your kind words!! :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Bang! Wham! Mam!
    Fabulous piece lady :)

    Michael x

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Sir Michael!! Appreciate it :)