WOW!!!!!!
this is a completely different way of writing. Atleast for me. I stick with the 4 stanza or more, but....my goodness. this was off the charts BEAUTIFUL!

"Though my mind is slipping, I will not be forgotten...
...I am a writer..."
This line was the most touching in your poem. I feel this way a LOT. Even though we may forget or may be forgotten we are still remembered through our works.. Very good poem.

Wow that was great! it reminded me of the series twilght!!! loved it 5/5