"But i looked up to see,
A brother who cared for me,"
I think this is the best line in your poem. It seems to have a lot of feeling in it. Bravo on a job well done!

A special sibling bond, it's to bad some lose that over time. I have one sister that our bond only gets stronger.
this was well penned with true feeling. Creative use of words . Delightful over all

A bond between brothers and sisters is a strong bond indeed. Little brothers are so pesky when they are small...but then they grow into those handsome men that look over us and protect us. Great poem!
Take care
Cindy

Time has a way of slipping by to quickly. All we have to hold on to are distant memories of our childhood. The smiles, laughter, and tears, all things that made us who we are today. Thanks for giving me something to make me reflect on those times.

Wow amazing poem, loved it:) your super good. i loved readign your peoms, very well written

I love this! :D This is really sweet poem. Amazing! I Can't say anything negative about it! I wish I could write like this

5/5

A bond between you and your brother written with such passion! A great write and a great love. 5/5
Very nice.

Lovely poem! I liked it!
Something I could of written about my Sister
(now in Heaven), BUT sounds crazy I know but I've had two messages back from her (thru' a Medium) and she's fine!
This poem bought back some very loving memories of her whilst she was on this Earth.
Great poem!

This poem is a true sister brother bond one. A bond never to be,broken.

Good write, Em

This poem is a true sister brother bond one. A bond never to be,broken.

Good write, Em

This poem is a true sister brother bond one. A bond never to be,broken.

Good write, Em