Butterflies~Haiku

by Poet on the Piano   Jul 9, 2008


Wings of pure beauty,
Fly across the red sunset,
With vibrant colors.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Butterflies are truly majestic, in the way they look and move. Their lives are so short, but also marvelous. They are creatures of pure beauty and worthy of all forms of poetry, especially Haiku's.

    Well done on painting a stunning scene, a butterfly, its beautifully patterned/ coloured wings gently carried by the breeze across a tangerene sky. Perfect, butterfly colours embossed on a sunset background.

    Michael

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    A haiku..yay really sweet
    I love the title, I totally love butterflies..very well-done !!
    Idk i've never thought of experiencing the haiku poems for real !! I'm too chicken, lol
    keep writing =]]
    best of luck

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Nice work...I loved the description u made..It was really perfect...
    Good job,keep it up:):)5/5..

  • 15 years ago

    by Lori

    I really loved this one because I have never seen anything like it on this site. Alot of ppl on here choose to use so many words to create a story. I like how you choose not to do that.
    Haiku's are excellent ways to make it great. You just have to know how to do it. And you know how :) Great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by xoxSwissCheesexox

    Nice poem! its beautiful! 5/5

    ~---Samanthaaaa---~