The silence holds many surprises for us, stuff in store for us, silence could be so different, yet so familar, but what I like about this piece is that you describe some stuff that the silence does. It's a deathly silence that provokes us, its good.
This is a very good poem, I can relate to it so well. It seems that sometimes the silence can be so strong it can almost have an echo of its own that only magnifies the emptiness of your surroundings. --- very good description of a unique concept --5/5...JIM