Comments : Silence

  • 9 years ago

    by The Prince

    Magnificently written, I love the structure and how you rhymed this, each stanza evoked emotion, well done :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Chinwe,

    Not bad at all! In fact I kinda love your voice here:)
    Keep going, girlie!

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Aish

    The best one ive read of yours so far.
    Brilliant. very insightful and true.
    5/5
    Aish
    xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    It's good, good flow. 4/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow good one , focusing on the silence like that relaly creep me out from silence!!

    great work

  • 9 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow good one , focusing on the silence like that relaly creep me out from silence!!

    great work

  • 9 years ago

    by Tangible heartache

    This a good poem, I like it.

    The silence holds many surprises for us, stuff in store for us, silence could be so different, yet so familar, but what I like about this piece is that you describe some stuff that the silence does. It's a deathly silence that provokes us, its good.

    4/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah Mirabile

    Your amazing.
    dont be quiting
    writing anytime
    soon. promise?
    [: <3 [: <3 [:

  • This is a very good poem, I can relate to it so well. It seems that sometimes the silence can be so strong it can almost have an echo of its own that only magnifies the emptiness of your surroundings. --- very good description of a unique concept --5/5...JIM

  • 9 years ago

    by halie

    Wow,
    AMAZING POEM
    i loved it
    you did a great job,
    and great write
    5/5

    -halie

    p.s thanks for the comment

  • 9 years ago

    by Osita

    That was very good I think you deserve a medal!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Amazing! Great flow and a really nice poem. 5/5.