Notion

by Sourav   Jul 10, 2008


In the midst of concrete jungle
Where dreams live, life tangles
I hunt for a spot with my finesse
Where I can see life's axenic face.

Where there is calmness of heartstrings
Melodies of birds - joy they bring
A feeling free from poisonous brace
How lovely would be my loneliness!

Yet life exhibits its cruel act
A Fallen race' dismal facts
A belief of mine lacks the space
No place for Eden on earth's base.

    report violation
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  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    I love it

    Deffenitly a win darl(:
    5/5 from me(: x

  • 13 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    I love the irony portrayed here. How lovely would be my loneliness! You are talented. Keep it up!!! God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 13 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    I love the irony portrayed here. How lovely would be my loneliness! You are talented. Keep it up!!! God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    That's defanitly a win. Beautiful write, and good emotions. You defanitly deserved all those comments! 5/5!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    Absolutely great!! It really captured my taste... This is one best I've ever read... It seems like it just came out naturally with a lot of amazing lines.. 5/5

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