Let my wounds kill me slowly
Don't ever touch those deep scars
Because I am a silent hell
And living one more day is so harsh....

The hard thing is to live in a silent hell bcoz no body will even care or notice that u r suffering..Just like the volcano under the sea or whatever..No one can feel it unless they see its Lava or hear its roar...But since U hide ur scars and pain,there is no chance to be seen or felt..
Great job,keep it up..

Well that was good...may I help you???

That's such a harsh way to think about yourself, cheer up hun... there's always good in this world

Whoa! That was deep Heba! Excellent write! 5/5

Wow. Stunned into silence! Amazing poem, but keep your hea up high and a smile on your face.

By the way, the title is really catchy, and if you're ever bored you could check out some of mine, I could use some talent like yours :)

Very powerful!

A very good poem. captivating.... some lines are really good. well done!

Wow this is one of your best...And I can relate to alot of these lines...very good and descriptive.

Hey thanx fr ur comment..i really like this poem a lot..really deep..good flow..keep writing coz ur in my favourites now!
btw ur from bahrain? thats great!
xoxo

Wow ............this has moved me so much...but if this hurt is urs then please dont shut urself inside release it and u'll find someone who truly most dearly cares abt u...if you've tried and failed dont give up as hope is all we ever have to be happy...and you deserve all love and care

Wow this was a really powerful and sad poem. it was so deep and emotional. you really did a great job in terms of capturing the essence of you pain. well dont love, keep it up.

Woah!
that was amazing-i loved it.

again, very sad-kinda depressing but the emotion is so deep and the expression so profound.

an easy 5/5 again-

aish
xx

Very nice touches ^_^

5/5

Amazing 10/5

Cause I'm a silent hell..let me go away .. let me die.. Ahh thats lovely poem ..

Let my wounds kill me slowly
Don't ever touch those deep scars
Because I am a silent hell
And living one more day is so harsh....

5/5
biya

I love this!

Amazing imagery, so much pain is felt throughout the poem... keep it up my wonderful friend.

I love this!

Amazing imagery, so much pain is felt throughout the poem... keep it up my wonderful friend.

I love this!

Amazing imagery, so much pain is felt throughout the poem... keep it up my wonderful friend.