Oh woww. This is full of sad emotions. Blaaah. I hate when friendships are broken. I'm really sorry to hear this. But, you'll be okay.. I know you are a strong person. This poem had a great flow to it though and was very easy to follow. It's a great piece, 5/5

I really loved this. It is full of so much hurt and sadness, but flows really well. Very Good

Woah, this piece was mindblowing! aside from the fact that i can completely understand and relate, in whole this poem was powered by strong emotions and excellent usage of words. the flow was gorgeous and consistent. i could feel the deep sorrow embedded in each word. i almost felt like crying after i read this poem. brilliant work. i love it so much! this is definitely going into my fav's. thanks for writing such a wonderful piece. you made my day. 5/5 love and peace.

What an emotional poem. My favorite stanza was:

Right then we both embraced
and the knife was taken away.
My life I couldn't waste,
because of you on that dark day.

Very sad, but with a happy ending. I like that. Sometimes all you ever need is friendship to pull you through your darkest days. If they remain by your side despite every downfall, you know they're a true friend. Excellent poem, 5/5.