Absolutely beautiful, how did I miss a beautifully crafted poem such as this? It's amazing how you penned this down from Crystal's perspective. Well nobody wants to lose their love ones but sadly fate didn't have any pity on her. Indeed, as the reader I can sense the longing the protagonist had of her husband, reminiscing all the moment they've shared together, but all that was taken away because of a stupid war. Well it's certain was a delightful to read. Excellent Job. Keep it up;)

Beautiful 10/5

I came across this title and found it truly poetic..then i came across the lines you penned and found them truly deep..
you have worded ur thooughts in such a unique heartfelt way.
With soooo many expressions to but bitter out any sweet moment..as the readers read.

a very very well written piece
which I personally admired
5/5!

Keith, this is truely beautiful, your an amazing humman being. Your words simple, yet perced my soul. Has a soldier, I salute you, has a fellow poet, I bow to you, and has a husband, I thank you. You are a very deep individuals, and your thoughts has a working man are the most imporant thing you have, continue to share your experances, your wisedom, and your love, with honnors, may your God, or Gods, bless every aspect of your life,

Spc. Samuel J. Ernst JR.
US ARMY.

Impressive... I was struck by this piece. Something that really came from the heart. You must be really sympathetic. Beautifully written. God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

This was a heart gripping poem. Beautiful , mixed in sorrow.
The title caught my eye the words held me in it's grip and refused to release me. Absolutely wonderful
Connie

Wow its a perfect piece.dis is a true representation of u feelings

The title pulled me in , it was so beautiful but I was in awe of the poem. She had to have been thrilled to the core to read something so amazing. So glad I read it

Connie

Well, that was surely a beautiful piece, youre such a talented writer <3

Keith, such a moving piece.

You write only truth and it's so heart-breaking we have to go through any loss but one of such an heroic man/woman must break us that bit more.

Take care, Em

Keith, such a moving piece.

You write only truth and it's so heart-breaking we have to go through any loss but one of such an heroic man/woman must break us that bit more.

Take care, Em

I hope these words now I write... The reverse syntax threw me off a bit in this particular line, Keith. My mind kept wanting to read, "I hope these words I write now."

Will describe the pain that I feel
My love, my life is gone
My heart, will it ever heal ? ... As for the remainder of your sad and despondent poem, I could clearly relate to the context.
Well done, sir!
~Dean Kuch