I think your feeling was expressed freely enough. It's really.. depressing. And I felt that.
I think if you added a bit of grammar it would be delivered a bit better, but it was great the way it was.
I can't get over your feelings. I'm really sorry you were hurt.
This is a great poem.
-Krystal[:

Omg idk how anyone could do that to someone they cant just say i love you then treat you like this tho it had happened to me before wow this poem was deep and at the same time beautiful

Wow! this was so deep.. can can't believe how much pain ur were in.. am sorry that u were or are hurt cuz of that person.. but i love it how u rote it =). awesome job.. take care =)

Well written =]
but very sad. Isn't love complicated & painful.

I love your writing. it always has such a powerful mesage. this is probably my fav so far. very deep kind of dark i like it

Sweet poem dude!! =)

This is really intense and powerful. It flows really well..but its really sad. Its soemthing alot of people are goig to be able to relate to..so nice work. 5/5