Comments : Playing With Fire

  • 15 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I would tell you which was my favorite part but I don't think I should put your whole poem in this comment. I'm not usually sucked into a poem, but that poem pulled me in and kept my entire attention span until the very last sylable. There was one line that stood out to me the most:

    " Exchanging names, numbers, and innocence"

    It just caught me for second and I had to reread it. It's sad sometimes how true that really is... This is one of those lines that tells a whole story in few words, to me at least.

    You have a great command of language, every stanza was like it's own little vivid world... I'm adding this poem and you to my favorites, just so you know. Amazing work!

    5/5 defanitely

    ~Ravyn

  • 15 years ago

    by Renee

    I like it

  • 15 years ago

    by Lizzi

    As do I.

  • 15 years ago

    by Renee

    Yeah, I also liked the line exchanging names, numbers, and innocence. I think I've heard it somewhere else though. But it's still awesome and that it's true. People like that are odd. And those relationships never last. Meh j rambled