Comments : Ramdon

  • 9 years ago

    by Ignoris

    Hmm...even if it doesnt completely make sense as a whole and can be interpreted different ways, it caught my interest! :)
    Really though, it's a cool poem, it painted a picture and the last two lines were kind of like a slap in the face....which is a good thing.
    Keep writing!
    Take care,
    Ignoris