Comments : Two Drops of Icy Tears

  • 9 years ago

    by Belle

    Reguardless of how sad this poem was, I reather enjoyed it. Very nicely done.

  • 9 years ago

    by Adna

    Very deep and meaning full
    I loved it

    Adena

  • 9 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    This poem is very sad and deep. trust me wheni say this i feel ur pain I to have lost someone i love without saying goodbye. And without knowing how she died some say she was murdered others say she did it herself i dont know the truth tho. My Mom is gone forever...And i dont know how

  • 9 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Also as a senior to this website i give u the vote. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Also as a senior to this website i give u the vote. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    *One tear becomes hard rock, refusing, sad
    The other becomes Hopeless, waiting death quietly* that was my favourite part.
    loved the idea. They seem so different.. though somewhat similiar..

    keep on writing n_n

  • Right off the bat the first stanza described great feelings of sorrow and longing for a certain person's touch.

    It was unique how you let each tear symbolize mourning over something different or reacting to sorrow in a different way.

    The last line was powerful.

  • 9 years ago

    by sweet escape

    I love rain...lol
    i dance in it. lol
    good poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by haileyy

    I love it. it has so much emotion in it.

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by katie

    A poem with point is what is so grate i loved it the depth of your wrighting the sarrow in your words its grate.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    Weow i really loved this piece. it was so different. very creative, and heartfelt. i can feel the emotions. and the title is perfect. this is a very inspiring poem. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 9 years ago

    by brittany beal

    Incredible darling.
    you deff. have my vote babe.

  • 9 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    This poem may be sad but it is written very well Good Job 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    This was truely Awesome!
    I loved it even though it was sad.
    This was a wonderful piece that was well written. Loved it!
    5/5

    ~JANA

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    CJ,

    I love how you gave your tears a name.
    It is so hard to deal with the pain love brings and being able to write about it gives so much relief, don't you think so?

    Hugs my sweet friend,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Finding myself

    Omg this is sooooo sad :(

  • Good job