Animal Cruelty!!

by xXHunnyGurlXx   Jul 17, 2008


The Chains cut so deep..
Its hard for me to breath..
I havent eaten in days..
The one who did this must pay..
I remember my life was happy..
But now my lifes just crappy..
I lay there wondering why..
But it never comes to mind..
Who would leave someone they once loved..
Leave them there to be unloved..
My big brown eyes now filled with tears..
Rips and shreds cover my ears..
From being beaten with that stick..
Either that or id get kicked..
They chained me up, left me for dead..
All those times I seem to dread..
I closed my eyes and tried to sleep..
But all I could do was weep..
I missed those days..
When I was free to play..
I missed my mother..
My sisters and brothers..
Why couldnt I stay with them..
Then my life could be full again..

Have you ever thought how they mite feel?
People who do this to their animals sicken me!! why would you do this if you dont love ur pet then u shouldnt own it!!! give it to someone who will love it and take care of it the way every animal should be!!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Wow. i may only be a cat person, but i love my cat! to write something from the animals POV is not only interesting, but very effective.

    after reading this i want to go hold my cat. u have successfully triggered an emotional response. i think that means you have outdone yourself this time.
    ~Ben

  • 15 years ago

    by Aubrey

    That is so sad. But its a great poem and I can tell you have a huge heart and a huge place for animals.

  • 15 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    Awww...this is a terribly sad poem..
    yet..it's true though..which makes it even sadder.
    i don't know why people would do that to animals at all..sigh.
    i salute you for making a poem on this issue. :)

    i gave u a 5. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow. This is amazingly written. Its so incredibly true and i agree with you all the way. I agree with Brittany ^^ the first few lines just drag you into the poem, keeping you reading til the end.

    Its a very sad poem, but beyond creative. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany

    God, the opening is so powerful
    "The Chains cut so deep..
    Its hard for me to breath.."
    it just pulls you in and makes you want to keep reading! 5/5, i really liked it. i have to admit i have never really paid much mind to animal cruelty, but this poem opens up my eyes.

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