I think you had a good concept going when you started this poem, but your spelling and grammatical errors took my mind away from what was happening. Instead of "..." between words, use commas. As for spelling, you only misspelled the word "your".

I'm not trying to be negative, it was a decent poem. I just want you to make it the best it can be. I'm not going to rate the poem, because I think that it can be considerably better if you edit some lines. Good luck!! =)

I'll come back in a few days and read it again, if you'd like.

I really liked it, and i am assuming it is about
"you know who" lol, and i loved the way you channeled your feeling towards him in this poem, i thought it was superb, really great
another well deserved 5/5

I liked this poem. You sort of funneled your feelings and made it your own. Great write.

-Dan