Fluent consistant and at the same time deep with fancy words... just the way I like em... if you can make a cake half as good as your poems it would be awsome XD

Hehe I love the way you explain the words in the end...

Nice write, easy read. good job
~Sarah~

-so nice of you to explain the words :]-

Just as great as all your others. Honestly, no flaws in any of your recent poems. They all are so smoothly written, awesome flow.. amazing words. :] I think it's very thoughtful of you to actually put a word bank at the bottom if someone doesn't understand what a word means. Keep writing, keep being amazing, yadaydaya. The same stuff I always tell you. You got it down, :) 5/5

Whew, it's hard to figure out when you are writing from a real experience, or wether you are emoting and just writing for the sake of writing. but either way, i'm sorry to have had the chance to come and check in, only to find out that something like this supposedly happened to you. I'm so sorry that i wasn't there to talk to you. I hope that this is just another write for the sake of wriitng that you do.. but judgeing by the fact that everything you've posted lately has been sad, i think something must be going on... please know that i'm here now to talk if you need to share....

hugs you tightly*

phil

I just wanted to add that i'm praying that everyone is healthy and alive in your world, and that no one has passed away, but if something did happen and your being real here, God, i'm so sorry.. you've got a open ear with me friend....

phil

I'm sorry about that.