Comments : The General and the Dancer

  • 15 years ago

    by Ignoris

    Ooh...I really like that. The general reminds me of my dad a bit. (not in a good way). But great work!
    Take care,
    Ignoris

  • 15 years ago

    by Rodney Kirby

    INTERESTING

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    I thought this was very good,a unique style. The contrast between a dancer ,serene and skilled to someone angry and out of control was outstanding! well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Inspired, no doubt, by the magnitude of contempory life...
    very effectively delivered...
    speaking raw and real Truth to imaginary power..(!)

  • 15 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    Thanks to everyone for all the positive feedback!

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    This is DEFINETLY the BEst poem of yours.
    I really like it.

  • 14 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Wow you left me wondering! i like that! i like this poem a lot! its impressive to me when someone can write a great short poem!