Comments : Lonely Girl

  • 9 years ago

    by Nobody

    Wow it amazes me wat you can do its such a beautiful poem i know how you feel its so hard to be me when no one understands me and you expressed exaclty wat i feel all the time you did an amazing job! 5/5 xxxxxxxx

  • 9 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    She was so sad, her heart was breaking when he tore her heart from heaving chest.

    Well done this is such a powerful poem. The repetition compounds your pain into acute agony.

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Austin

    Wow very sad. Good job, you made the characters emotions very clear.

  • 9 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    Excellent poem well written :)

  • 9 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    "She fell to her knees
    With a dagger in her hands"

    i think that part just flows so beautifully!
    amazing i love it, it is so beautiful, sad but beautiful! i gave you a 5!

  • 9 years ago

    by thesuffocationinsafety

    Oh wow this is really beautiful. Very sad too, and I can really relate. Great job
    5/5

  • I loved this one...
    Nice job...

  • 9 years ago

    by haileyy

    Wow this is an amazing poem. it's short but right to the point.

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Trevors Baby Girl Forever

    I really like this! You did a great job!

  • 9 years ago

    by ShyandHurt

    Incredible poem. It has great flow and easy to relate to, though in small amount of words. Very very good. 5/5
    ~Shy

  • 9 years ago

    by trinity

    I like the plot this poem is pretty cool

  • 9 years ago

    by Kait

    Great poem :) is this your style or writing?

  • 9 years ago

    by namless unactive account

    Deep emotion 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow. her heart sank like the titanic. those are my favorite lines. keep it up.=)

  • 9 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked it once again great poem!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Silent Suicide

    ...Excellent...I Love it Sounds Like Me But Diffrent Gender.....Depression Is'nt Fun Like it Used To be....Im Still A Lil F**ked up From Her And All The Times She Hurt Me....But I Can Cope With It

  • Dats a excellent poem i reali no how ya feel... wil u comment on my poems plzzzzz

  • 9 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    Awwww, sad and sweet, i like it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sydney

    This is so sad, yet very beautiful. You did an amazing job expressing your emotions, yet only in few words. Excellent. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    Such feeling of solitute.
    a lovley write.
    i love how you kept ur title going thru out the poem

    my poem dream on does that.
    for some reason
    it reminds the reader what the poem is trully about.

    5/5