Comments : Whispers and lies

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Whispers as I walk down the street,
    knowing glances thrown my way,
    stories and rumors passed from mouth to mouth
    about this girl that nobody truly knows
    and yet all of them think they do."

    Great opening stanza, and I think a lot of people can relate to what you wrote. Everyone thinks they know you so well and all but they really don't. This poem is wonderful, it has a great message and shows what really goes on in the world today. Nicely written.

  • 15 years ago

    by Willow

    How true!
    if only some people would treat others how they want to be treated..
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing