Oh my goodness. what a great poem. very well written and you expressed emotions wonderfully. if you don't mind me asking, did this really happen to you?

none the less, 5/5 :)

Wow this poem is so strong i can feel the emotions in this poem its beautiful!!! I love it. If this is true i am very sorry tho from the bottom of my heart u if u want to please read my poem FARE WELL OLGA!!!!!!!!!! I can relate to this poem i no what u feel. :(

Great poem!! 5/5 very sad though T_T

one of the best I read all day ^^

Hi! I give u 5/5 coz we have 1thin in commen! I love poems that rhyme too. And for ur poem is really nice.. If u take a look on my poems, plz tell about ur opinion coz i try to write rhymes too.. Good luck.:)