This is a powerful poem. I like it a lot. Yes, life is a struggle... This poem for struggling...

"As we have only one life; then there is nothing else."

Actually I think like this too...We have one life.. People say after heart stops beating that person is dead. But the person is not dead. It is not the end of anything... It is just one state of life...

After that is too late to regret what he done...

Great poem. There's so much expression and power, and it has a nice flow of words. I love it 5/5

"As we have only one life; then there is nothing else. "

So very true... the message behind the poem is wonderful... very inspiring... very motivating...

"So come out together from the dreadful womb
Stop living like dead in the house like tomb"

^^ya truly we have become to dead... devoid of affection... deaf to other's cries... dumb to raise our voices... so truly depicted...

"Come out blood rinsed to change your fate.

Your blood will talk for you, afloat them all
Sometimes blood is needed, for revolution's call"

^^wonderful write...
but i felt that "blood" was used a little too much.. maybe u could have substituted something else... or used a metaphor... but thats just a suggestion...

wonderfully written..
keep writing...

OMG Sourav! Another hat trick here! Another magical poem filled with so much depth. Very strong emotions and words are straight from the heart (can feel it). And yes, this write speaks to me in volumes. Flattery aside, you managed to write somethings here that I am so proud of. Excellent poem!!

An individual can have an impact
an individual's voice can do wonders and change what almost seems impossible - the world.
nicely written.

Excellent poem Souray it was emotional without being overbearing , it carried an important message which you did a first class job getting across.
The poem flowed well , rhymed well and above all targeted a sensitive subject, well done

Grant

Yesss! Such strong writing. Powerful, vengeful to the last line. Some lessons in a few of these lines to be learned by all.
You show strength, and adversity. Well done.

This was an alright poem, what really held it back was the improper use of english in some sections of them poem.