Young girl

by Megan   Jul 26, 2008


Well this is about my cousin named Megan who was only 17.
its a song so ya.

Oh she was a young girl, at 17 she pasted away..
Oh she was so beautiful she made the stars shine so bright.
Oh she was a young girl who made every body smile.
Oh she was a young girl who pasted away at 17.
Oh she was she was a beautiful young girl
who pasted away at 17. she was so beautiful she made the stars
shine so bright. Oh she was a young girl at 17 she pasted away.
Oh she was a beautiful young girl at 17 she pasted away...

I LOVE YOU MEGAN!!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Im sorry thats really sad :( 5/5 i can see it being a song :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I'm sorry you had to go through this.....

    I know this is a song, but it repeats to much, to make it better try describing what your cousin was like, kind of like this:

    "Always making people laugh and smile"

    Or something to that extent...

    But otherwise good job, you could make this into a better song and add a lot more about your cousin and how great she was to have around, you get what I'm saying, so good job!

  • 15 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    Im so sorry you went through this,
    nice dedication

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