Thats sweet 5/5

I though this was good, but kind of cliche like a lot of other love poems. Try putting more emotion/feeling into this poem, and making it more unique. This poem has potential, but I would go back and work a bit on it, to improve it......

This was so sweet.. nice job=)

I really like this one =]
good job!
keep up the good writing!

Out of all your poems this is probably the one closest to poetry. You can tell there is an obvious emotion of love here, but the way you've expressed it is hard to perceive as poetry. Take a look at a couple of poetry styles, if you dont like to write in stanzas, try Haikus, theres a way to break into poetry, and it looks as if you could use a little help.

Remember a little help will go a long way, the more you know about poetry the more room you have to grow.