This is great, very heartfelt and you expressed your love for our Lord well..... I agree with all that you wrote, and that the Lord is always there for you. Nice write, this was very enjoyable to read, good work!

Both you and jim hav done a great hjob with this 1, i look forward to reading any other work u guys put together =)

Excellent work. May God bless you...5/5
Understanding is what you need to do because things happen for a reason.
You have my vote!
~Chinwe~
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Hullo Chelsea i commented on this poem for Jim so its only fair that i do the same for you.Well done to both of you Chelsea, i think that this is a nice inspirational poem with a good flow and rhyme.

Grant

The poem is so nice. The poem will help the readers to be a good person