Untitled 1.... (By Anonymous)

A painful write yet it's not spilled out instead it unravels bit by bit...a tender write..take care

Today i ready your peoms and quotes. every sad this make me also sad.
jane kyo esa hota hai jo pyaar mein hota hai rota hai. phir bhi jane kyo vo jita hai, shayad esi liya pyaar hota hai.

best of luck
take care

Wow, it's really good! I love your choice of lexis. Very emotional, well done xxxx

Beautifully written poem. No cliches. Sadly projected. Opening line says so much without actually saying ......... Last line I for one can totally relate to. How many times and to how many people does this happen ...... finding answers which are but nightmares.......sublime.

Hey karan... this is beautiful...
simply amazing... it really touched my heart...

"Have we ever parted?
Or was it either never stayed
Was there a goodbye from the distance?
Before the heart was slayed."

^^ I felt as if step by step you are disclosing your pain... slowly and silently...

"As I routinely face this question and answer nightmare"

^^ this really toched my heart strings...

wonderful write...
keep writing..