Untitled 1.... (By Anonymous)

by Prasad B   Jul 27, 2008


Have we ever parted?
Or was it either never stayed
Was there a goodbye from the distance?
Before the heart was slayed.

The night is darkest by this hour
Sitting beneath the lonely lantern as I stare
The same downpour chooses this skin to prick and tear
As I routinely face this question and answer nightmare.

(On Behalf Of... Karan)....Anonymous

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  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Today i ready your peoms and quotes. every sad this make me also sad.
    jane kyo esa hota hai jo pyaar mein hota hai rota hai. phir bhi jane kyo vo jita hai, shayad esi liya pyaar hota hai.

    best of luck
    take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow, it's really good! I love your choice of lexis. Very emotional, well done xxxx

  • 10 years ago

    by gracey grey

    Beautifully written poem. No cliches. Sadly projected. Opening line says so much without actually saying ......... Last line I for one can totally relate to. How many times and to how many people does this happen ...... finding answers which are but nightmares.......sublime.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Hey karan... this is beautiful...
    simply amazing... it really touched my heart...

    "Have we ever parted?
    Or was it either never stayed
    Was there a goodbye from the distance?
    Before the heart was slayed."

    ^^ I felt as if step by step you are disclosing your pain... slowly and silently...

    "As I routinely face this question and answer nightmare"

    ^^ this really toched my heart strings...

    wonderful write...
    keep writing..

  • 10 years ago

    by Meme

    The poem is so amazing, this must be a really amazing writer the one who wrote it