Twist in the story

by Cotton Candy Clouds   Jul 28, 2008


Tell me, am I supposed to be happy?
Anything I do leaves a siring pain.
One way or another,
I am always left with nothing to gain.

I have nothing left to prove.
Chosen to be free of worry or care.
Life is devious and cheats.
No longer does it matter what's fair.

Try and reason.
Where did it get you?
Now your two steps back.
When will you be through?

Not enough to apologize.
You have twisted me enough.
Tried and lied. Said you cared.
Now, who called that bluff?

Amazing how far you went with it.
Told me I was the one but proposed to her.
Sorry, she accidentally now knows the truth.
It's off. To the wedding that is referred.

All I have to say to you is
that you got what you intended.
I payed for my mistakes and yours.
How do you like how it ended?

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  • 9 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    This was a bit more simple than your other poems but still the emotion is so very strong in your words. This presents the mood of "Yeah it hurt, but I am still standing and its time to pay"
    I like that attitude and strength.
    I like how thats conveyed
    "Amazing how far you went with it.
    Told me I was the one but proposed to her.
    Sorry, she accidentally now knows the truth.
    It's off. To the wedding that is referred. "
    5/5
    laura

  • 9 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Hmm, thats messed up but people can be really mean a hurtful. The wording was great and the emotion was strong. I really liked this poem. I gave it a 5/5. I saw nothing wrong with it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Amazing how far you went with it.
    Told me I was the one but proposed to her.
    Sorry, she accidentally now knows the truth.
    It's off. To the wedding that is referred.

    ^^^^ sweet revenge! I liked this stanza a lot, Tabi!
    I have seen you make more than one poem about this, I am guessing you hve been through this in real life, if so: what a loser that guy is! He has lost, not you!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by halie

    "Tell me, am I supposed to be happy?
    When everything I do or want
    causes me aching pain and anguish.
    It all comes back to taunt me. "

    i can relate to this ^^ in sooooo many ways
    i loved it!!
    :D
    you did an AMAZING job
    the flow was perfect
    5/5

    -halie

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Try and reason.
    Where did it get you?
    Now your two steps back.
    When will you be through?"

    ^Love how you ask these questions, and this whole poem is so amazing, you did a fabulous job! The title is great and you really drew me into this poem, nice work! Keep writing, always and forever!