Very touching poem well written, keep up the great work

Amanda! Omg, I had no idea you could write like this. Seriously... I knew you were an amazing writer, but wow. This just blew me away. It was so touching. I don't know how you do it. Every sentence, every stanza. It all hit my heart deeply like a knife. So many mixed emotions and feelings. I wasn't expecting anything like this when I first saw the title of the poem.

I don't believe I have a favorite stanza in this piece. What I do love, however, is how you said something about that teddy bear in every stanza. It was genius. One thing so relatable to many readers. As I was reading, I started looking forward to seeing what was going to happen with the teddy next. Dorky, I know, but I just really loved that.

As I said before, amazing, Amanda. I think you really have outdone yourself here. Don't think your writing style is nothing less than excellent. It's unique, different, but so amazing it could blow down an entire city. Hehe. Great job, girl. 5/5 from me. <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Amazing chioce of wording! This poem is brilliantly written. Each stanza is just as good as the last and the meaning is very powerful.
Excellent job you are a very talented writter =]