Awww that's so sad..but SO good. Keep it up Shanik

Wow great poem, made me teary picturing all this.... great lesson taught here... :[

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That was so sad...I liked it alot..

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Wow, you can visually see this in my mind...
I understand this poor child, not that i can relate, but my imagination spurs into reality at timez...
Keep up the great work..
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One of the most realistic poems I've read here for a long time. With those small stanzas you've projected a very strong and true picture of one of the dark side of our life. This is a very good work of creative poetry. Amazing!

What a heartfelt poem and it made me think about how there are so many other children hungry and starving. But anyway, nice work, you wrote this very well. Keep writing, always and forever....

This poem is good i liked it

That was really touching....thanks for the hug lol
~*~Amber~*~

Wow... so true...

For delivering fruit to ripe,
to should be too ..
Otherwise , really good poem . It has a really strong meaning .

Wow...pretty cool insight....

=/ I hate it when kids are stuck with parents who are pricks...its just not right.