Hmm. I can clearly tell how you are feeling.. but just remember to keep your head up and smile.. Try staying postitive.. I could tell you kind of switched to a negative mood at the last stanza. You did a good job with this write though. I could tell how you were feeling. Good job, Les.. 5/5.

I liked that... i know how you feel...but other then that i liked it and good job 4/5