Venus Star

'Floating clouds of wonder
In a nebular of elements
Fears the morning mist
Will soon fade out my Venus star'

just wonderful! what a imagery and expression! the whole poem is written very creatively! i liked the lines you've constructed. wonderful poem!

Sam...you have penned such sadness entertwined with beauty here.

A transcending light
Illuminating eternity
Passion and delight
Consuming a tranquil night

Love can light up our lives with it's brillance. Great imagery and word choices.

I've been waiting my whole life
For a smile to take me this high
Loosing the sense of gravity
Elevated so far off the ground

Isn't it amazing what a smile from someone we love can do to us. Turns your world upside down.

Hoping for an opportunity
To sway in your atmosphere
Shockwaves from a supernova
Form as two galaxies may collide

One day when you least expect it.....it will hit you out of no where.

Floating clouds of wonder
In a nebular of elements
Fears the morning mist
Will soon fade out my Venus star

The dream lover that disappears with the morning.

Great write!
Love Cindy

Sammy!

My sweet friend!
So nice to see you posting again:)
I love the whole concept of the stars and all..
I am sure you will find your supernova, sweetheart. One day she will walk into your life and boom! Sammy will lose his heart.

Love always,

XXXIngrid