This reminds me of my dad..he hasn't died or committed suicide yet, but it wouldn't shock me if it happened this very night or any of those to come...his drinking is terrible..ad depression..its just sad what those 2 things can do to ya... :'( they not only kill the victim, but all the witnesses as well
I'm so sorry.
I know how you feel, I lost my father and dad. It's very hard. My father left me and my dad past away. I don't even know what to say.
This was great and had tons of emotion.
I'm so sorry for your loss sweetie.
And this poem really touched me it's so heart felt, deep and holds so much emotion.
I absolutely loved how you used to first stanza for the last stanza as well :) it creates and amazing effect on the poem.
once again I am sorry for your loss hun.
mucho love mwah xxxxxxx
THAT REALLY GOT TO ME, I LOST MY COUSIN TWO YEARS AGO WE ROAD TO A CLUB TOGETHER AND WE HAD BEEN DRINKING AND AT SOMETIME HE GOT KICKED OUT AND HE TRIED TO CALL ME BUT I LEFT MY PHONE AT HOME AND HE LEFT AND HIT A TREE AND TWO WEEKS LATER PASSED AWAY I STILL BLAME MYSELF IN SOMEWAY BUT IM VERY SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS PEOPLE SHOULD LEARN SOMETHING FROM YOUR POEM