My sweet Sammy,

I will answer this personally and just leave a quick reply here on this public place.
You did well on this sweetheart, you are an outstanding poet and I am glad you still feel like posting. I know times are hard for you right now. Hang on in there..in time your luck will change for the better.
You will always have me, that is for sure.

*hugs you tight*

Love, Ingrid

Sam
It is so good to see you writing again. What a wonderful piece you have penned. Your imagery and word choices are great.

Singing a white goodbye
Words from a blank reply
A sleeveless heart begins to cry
As a breath is left to die

There is so much sadness in your words. This reallt tugs at the heart.

Roles played by dramatic actors
weaving letters across banners
reminiscing over life's blunders
swimming in a sea of errors

We spend so much time thinking of where we went wrong or if things had turned out different.

Killing the beat of a hopeful soul
agony through an open hole
wondering how time will roll
As emptiness takes it's toll.

This brings tears to my eyes. I know the feeling of emptiness so well. The feelings as if there is nothing left fopr you in this world.

Excellent job!
Love Cindy

When i first read it.. I wondered how easily each word rolled out ... without any effort... beatiful write...
'white goodbye'... 'blank reply'.. i loved these terms..

"
Singing a white goodbye
Words from a blank reply
A sleeveless heart begins to cry
As a breath is left to die "

^^ I loved this stanza... very touching...

keep writing..

The flow kept it together then the imagery added another element to it. I like the first stanza which caught my attention. It just easily came together.
~Faith-less

Sad but great! Well written!