Bring Me Home

S'okay. By the way, I can't figure out how to eliminate some 'I's from the poem without taking away from the meaning I want it to have. Anybody have any ideas?

Hahaha ok....well, i guess we do have few differents thoughts then ;)
oh yeah and i did mean to write snowy night, cuz of the lights and yeah....sry lol it's been a loong week already =/

I wasn't exactly picturing that when I wrote it, but okay! :) When I imagined was it being a humid summer night (because the lamp post lights the way), not bustling, but sort of walking slowly along, and of course, never reaching home.

Sry lol i didn't read the last stanza.
um ok not reaching home, but wandering back into the storm..... hmm... =/

I'm getting a very clear picture of a snowy day and someone bustling thru the storm following the light of the posts, and finally reaching home.
wow
two thumbs up!!!