This poem is heavenly and your talent bursts through throughout the poem

Cradle me softly as I sleep
My angel I need you so
Past this grave I cannot see
These memories forever flow

^^ This stanza really got to me, the sadness it portrays.....
I too have an angel and this poem just hits so close to home for me, really beautiful work..

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

This poem was so amazing, I actually cryed. It was as if i was feeling every emotion, when I read this heartfelt poem. also a sad poem. but really great. -jewels

I love this poem! i really relate to it.
i'm a strong believer in guardian angels and this poem reminded me of all the times when i'd be struggling to get through yet another one of life's challenges and would just cry out asking for help.

great job =)

Good job. Keep writing and working hard.

Not as good as your other two, but still an excellent piece. I think the real problem for me, was the first stanza, or should I say the lack or rhyme in the first stanza? That for me was the only major problem, and even that's not a big deal. Well done...agian. I'm sure you're tired of hearing it now, from me and from others, but hey, I guess that's the price you pay for great poetry, lol.

Brad

What a very heart breaking piece. Once in awhile you read a poem and just feel so connected with it. This was one of those times.

Tell me can you see me?
I'm losing this twisted game
This life holds no more beauty
Yet so much loss and pain

I have felt this so many times. When we have lost someone we love so much. We are blinded tot he beauty around us. The pain of death is one of the greatest I have ever felt.

Cradle me softly as I sleep
My angel I need you so
Past this grave I cannot see
These memories forever flow

Wanting to feel the love and security of your loves arms around you again. Shutting your eyes sometimes you can all most relive moments past. Then reality hits you once more.

I'm so sorry my lonely angel
I know I promised to try
Will you be here next to me?
As my life now passes by

Trying to hold on to life without some one is so hard to do. Especially when they have been so much a part of who you are for so long.

Excellent job!
Take Care
Cindy

Its very unique... and its look dramatic for me.. love it

5/5

Wow! your words are very much a gift, as they express the feelings we all have/had in our lifes. Good job 5/5

This is sad and great.. this poem make me sad and wow. no more can i add but keep it up.

I'm so sorry my lonely angel
I know I promised to try
Will you be here next to me?
As my life now passes by

my favorite stanza. i really enjoyed this piece. 5/5